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The concept of voice

Voice is the style that makes an authors writing his or her own, a unique quality that characterizes speech and thought pattern, a visible aspect of one’s character that may or may not impress others. Personality is a characteristic that defines or molds an individual; however, personality in writing becomes its own separate character based on the writer. Through a persons writing you are able to understand his thoughts, concerns or ideas of that particular person but you do not become fully aware of that persons complete personality, the quality or condition that helps complete a person. Depending on the type of writing the writer develops a certain characteristic to form an argument choosing to write in a certain style in which the piece may best fit and suite that particular type of writing. The next two paragraphs are an imitation of a passage from Frankfurt’s, “On Truth,” by keeping the same idea of Frankfurt the style of the piece changes but the content remains the same.

When a person apprehends in an emotion through their senses or mind they discover an underlining effect -- which is, when a person encounters a person or object in which they trigger bodily changes and motivate joyful behavior; Spinoza believes that the person becomes incapable of avoiding love for that particular person or object. He believes this to be the effect of love; the response(s) given to the person or object that causes happiness. Based on his understanding, a person cannot ignore his/her affection towards an object that causes happiness and joy. This emotion is a positive affective aspect of consciousness and the cause for a person to persevere life and become more aware of themselves. There are several specific instances in which a person notices a degree of controlled thought or observation, somewhat more radical, Spinoza’s definition of love: people tend to serve affection in order to attain who they are, to uncover a self discovery, and to take on a successful life without interfering or disrupting their primary characteristics.


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On Spinoza’s belief of the eternal possibility of love, he makes recognition of another possibility that seems to be free from error. The strong affection and devotion a person expresses towards a person or object become the most highly cherished. These objects become the most evident and the most easily understood and become a possession that continues to be beneficial and pleasurable.

After completing this exercise the idea of voice remains to be a concentration of style. While doing the imitation of Frankfurt it sometimes became hard to ignore his style of choice but, I find it easier to choose style over content. If content is the substance and focus of a paper then it only becomes the subject matter of thought, discourse or study; by determining its shape and appearance, the paper develops form which is, the manner or style of arranging and coordinating ideas for a satisfied and effective result. In achieving this structure and organization of ideas, the writers main focus is on his style of writing; developing a particular, distinctive characteristic of mode and technique and processing an orderly, logical and systematic way of presentation.

 

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illaria on whole page :

Jessica,
I think your paper is well written. You do a good job stating your opinion of voice. However, I think it would help your paper to add examples of your definition of voice or possibly explaining how you came to that definition rather than just jumping into what the definition is. Thanks for sharing.
~Hilary

October 15, 2008 4:01 pm
kblax23 on whole page :

Jessica,
Thanks for sharing this piece with me. You presented your ideas well throughout the paper, nice work. I imagine you are still waiting for a little more content, but when you come up with it, I would suggest maybe shorter paragraphs, so that the reader doesn’t get sucked into one big one. It can seem overwhelming, and you can break up your main points in a different paragraph, making it a more effective style to the reader. Thanks again.
Kyle

October 15, 2008 6:31 pm
bvaldez1988 on paragraph 1:

The first paragraph is a solid start. You explain what you believe style is and what personality is and how it affects the paper differently from style. Good

October 15, 2008 6:57 pm
bvaldez1988 on whole page :

Jessica-
This paper is probably one of the most clear cut papers I’ve read, which is nice. I liked how you told the reader exactly what your thinking and why you think that way. One of the only things I would change is to break up the paper into smaller paragraphs, that way its easier on the eye.
Thanks for sharing your paper with me!
Beatriz

October 15, 2008 6:59 pm
Lindsey Y on whole page :

Jessica-

I loved the clarity of this paper, just from how you were able to define the concept of writing with voice. It would be nice if you used some sort of textual support to make this paper more effective. Otherwise, great paper! Thank you for sharing your paper with me.

Lindsey Y.

October 15, 2008 10:11 pm
mjanel02 on whole page :

Jessica –
I really like your directness in this paper. You get straight to the point and support your opinion very well. A suggestion to add to the length would be to analyze your imitation. This would also help support your opinion.
Thanks for sharing your paper with me.
Melissa

October 16, 2008 6:20 am
mitchellwoll on whole page :

Jessica,
I liked your papers because it was well written. Yet, I think you should add some examples of voice to backup your thoughts about it. It would make your argument of voice more complete.
Thanks for sharing your paper with me,
Mitchell

October 16, 2008 9:32 am
nugewriter16 on whole page :

Jessica,
This paper was definitely well-thought out and written well, which I think was difficult with this assignment. You clearly stated the way you felt about voice in the first sentence, and then elaborated on it throughout the rest of the paper. One thing I would suggest is to put even more reasons why you think voice is what it is as a backup. That would make the paper that much better!
Thanks for sharing this with me!
Kristin
nuge5901@bears.unco.edu

October 16, 2008 3:15 pm
stra6907 on whole page :

Jessica,
I really like that you get right to the point! It makes your point very clear and easy to see. Your paragraphs are very long, it would be easier on the reader if you broke them up a bit!
Thanks for sharing your paper with me!
Kate

October 16, 2008 4:29 pm
stra6907 on paragraph 1:

I like that you say style changes based on the piece, but I would like to have more examples of it actually happening.

October 16, 2008 4:31 pm
zwic7726 on whole page :

Jessica,
I appreciate the definition of voice in the first part of your essay and your imitation is effective. I feel that the analysis in the third part is somewhat lacking. If this were a little beefed up and elaborated, I feel this would be a great paper. Thank you for sharing your essay.
Gerrek

October 16, 2008 8:15 pm
kitto on paragraph 5:

I like this paragraph, I think it could be perhaps expanded a bit more since you make such an interesting and strong statement.

October 16, 2008 10:31 pm
Monte on whole page :

Jessica,
I think you have a lot of valid points in your essay. Your structure allows for solid reinforcement of your argument, but I’d love to see some examples integrated so that your reinforcements can really pack the punch that they should. I think you have a great start that will lead into a promising final draft.

Monte

October 16, 2008 10:33 pm
kitto on whole page :

Jessica,
Nice work, I found it quite interesting. However, I agree with Kate that I found a lot of the sentences to be long in the paragraphs. Perhaps consider breaking them up to make it easier to read. Also, maybe consider adding some quotes to support some of your statements that you made to make them more powerful. Thanks for sharing.
-Jamie

October 16, 2008 10:34 pm
Lindsay on whole page :

Jessica-
I liked how you jumped right to your definition. I agree with most of the other in the suggestion to break up your paragraphs, it would be an easier flow. Great paper! Thanks for sharing!
Lindsay M

October 16, 2008 11:05 pm
Jeremy on whole page :

Jessica,
I really liked your intro, the unpacking of voice is really original. I also like how you described voice as important because it helps the flow of the paper. “coordinating ideas for a satisfied and effective result.” really good stuff, I’d like to hear about a little more though!
Jeremy

October 17, 2008 12:19 am
Mateja on whole page :

Jessica,
I really enjoyed reading your paper because it got right to the point of the matter. I think your paper would be easier to read if you broke some sections up and worked on transitions. I also think citing some parts of the text would be helpful but overall it was very entertaining and interesting.
Mateja

October 17, 2008 8:29 am
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